Post by Lucky on Jun 12, 2009 1:31:16 GMT -5
*Random old sci-fi story I tried to write a long time ago, but then just stopped writing. All of this (like the Tempus story) was based off of or inspired by MaSu. So I think we can use this, here's the base storyline I had created for this:*
Three monstrous machines capable of dominating and destroying an entire planet. Powered by the lives of three different people from three different races. Once their bodies are hooked into the machines, they are fused with it. And they cannot get out. They are meshed with machine forever. The concept came from a scientist named Marcel. A crime queen known only as Lady Fedora, came across Marcel’s plans. Plans to create three super machines. Her idea for world domination. With their collaboration they’ve created a vile plan. A plan that has been in the works for many a year. The way they found out it was only three races that could pilot these machines was because of their first failed experiment. Marcel used a human as the first test. The human body revolted in the machine causing it to self-destruct. Marcel used many human test subjects to try and make the fusion work. It didn’t. They tested the DNA of three others: Salvian, Orriek, and Abarian. All three meshed with the machine. So started the training. To find the three concepts. Lady Fedora went to a professor named Dominick for the training. He used a fake college to attract many older teens from all the races to be ‘trained’. Dominick planted inhibitor chips in all of their heads so they could see a real college, go to class, and not know what was going on. At night, they are shut down. Trained and when they wake up, they might remember some of it, but only play it off as a weird dream. Then one day a student named Spades had his inhibitor malfunction. And his eyes were opened. He was able to escape with a handful of students. But many were left behind, many Spades wish he had saved. Because of the escape some of the students told people what was going on there and Lady Fedora found out that Dominick was being investigated. And to save it from going back to her, she cut all ties from him. But she did get one fully trained Orriek out of it. And she was about to be merged into her machine, the Jupiter XIV, when Canteroth her boyfriend from the college broke in and saved her. Now they along with Spades and others are on the run from Lady Fedora. Marcel was put in charge of finding them. Training them more if need be and picking the right ones for their concept project. And to create three monstrous machines to take over the world.
But what happens when plans backfire. When greediness is replaced with loyalty.
Marcel betrays Lady Fedora. He found a way for a human to mesh with machine. So he puts himself into another Jupiter. Jupiter V. Now he could start destroying and ruling. Because what happens when bodies are meshed with the Jupiter’s they become super intelligent. Computer mixed with human brain and emotion. The ultimate A.I.
This is how it could go. Spades, Canteroth, and their friends could have a choice. A Salvian, an Orriek, and a Abarian could sacrifice themselves to become part machine to help fight Marcel. Or they could destroy the machines and consequently have nothing to fight against Marcel.
And Lady Fedora ironically disappears…
Three monstrous machines capable of dominating and destroying an entire planet. Powered by the lives of three different people from three different races. Once their bodies are hooked into the machines, they are fused with it. And they cannot get out. They are meshed with machine forever. The concept came from a scientist named Marcel. A crime queen known only as Lady Fedora, came across Marcel’s plans. Plans to create three super machines. Her idea for world domination. With their collaboration they’ve created a vile plan. A plan that has been in the works for many a year. The way they found out it was only three races that could pilot these machines was because of their first failed experiment. Marcel used a human as the first test. The human body revolted in the machine causing it to self-destruct. Marcel used many human test subjects to try and make the fusion work. It didn’t. They tested the DNA of three others: Salvian, Orriek, and Abarian. All three meshed with the machine. So started the training. To find the three concepts. Lady Fedora went to a professor named Dominick for the training. He used a fake college to attract many older teens from all the races to be ‘trained’. Dominick planted inhibitor chips in all of their heads so they could see a real college, go to class, and not know what was going on. At night, they are shut down. Trained and when they wake up, they might remember some of it, but only play it off as a weird dream. Then one day a student named Spades had his inhibitor malfunction. And his eyes were opened. He was able to escape with a handful of students. But many were left behind, many Spades wish he had saved. Because of the escape some of the students told people what was going on there and Lady Fedora found out that Dominick was being investigated. And to save it from going back to her, she cut all ties from him. But she did get one fully trained Orriek out of it. And she was about to be merged into her machine, the Jupiter XIV, when Canteroth her boyfriend from the college broke in and saved her. Now they along with Spades and others are on the run from Lady Fedora. Marcel was put in charge of finding them. Training them more if need be and picking the right ones for their concept project. And to create three monstrous machines to take over the world.
But what happens when plans backfire. When greediness is replaced with loyalty.
Marcel betrays Lady Fedora. He found a way for a human to mesh with machine. So he puts himself into another Jupiter. Jupiter V. Now he could start destroying and ruling. Because what happens when bodies are meshed with the Jupiter’s they become super intelligent. Computer mixed with human brain and emotion. The ultimate A.I.
This is how it could go. Spades, Canteroth, and their friends could have a choice. A Salvian, an Orriek, and a Abarian could sacrifice themselves to become part machine to help fight Marcel. Or they could destroy the machines and consequently have nothing to fight against Marcel.
And Lady Fedora ironically disappears…